Things I need to change before Game Deoms

When we did our game demos my game was ok i guess. There was a few mistakes but thats ok.I guess that is only normal though. There was a couple of spelling mistakes I need to change before next thursday.When you have bad spelling and things that makes your grades look poorly.The said that our game was pretty good.When we where prsenting we looked at the screen alot so the teacher said that we need to show more action act like we know exactly what where talking about.He saaid to make index cards if we need to.

Game Demo

Well today we presented our game demos in Mr.Addair class and we watched mostly all of the other groups game demos.They where very interesting and they gave me an good ideal of what each groups game ideals where it let me imagine what types of games I will be playing.We all learned what we done wrong by being judged by our teachers.Mr.Addair is a really nice teacher and he explained to us how important that the game demos will be before Christmas break.He told us what we should do to make our games better and nicer than what they are now.My Group the rockstars has alot of working on to be ready in june but now the teacher kknow what we are mainly focusing on.Everyone is looking forward to reallly seeing what ealse will be in the game that is not included in the gmae demos.